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Gone
Contributed by
snowflake
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Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 06:06:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My life is like a book that was never read
a thought that was never said
A heart that was never fixed
a love that was never true
the opposite of I LOVE U
the Same as I HATE U
but that all changed
when i met you
i felt like i was complete
like i could be whatever i dreamed to be,
like i could fly and touch the sky,
and you would just wipe away the tears i cryed
and i would stay up all night
and think of only you until the morning light
and when i slept i dreamed of you
what a beautiful sight was in my veiw
but you just couldn't see
how much you meant to me
i guess i have you to thank
for making my heart break
don't try to apologize now
for its far too late...
well i'm glad you moved on
i just need time to get back strong
for it wont be long...
you'll want me back and i'll be GONE...
Copyright ©
snowflake
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2006-03-28 18:06:23]
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Re: Gone
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 11:16:29 AM AEST
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This was a good poem. I liked the last stanza. It was good and I could relate in a way.. Great poem..
thanks for the comment on "Killer Words".. I appreciate it..
Take care
christina |
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Re: Gone
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by blue_angel on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 12:09:37 PM AEST
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i can totally relate to this...
ur last stanza was a killer ending... awesome!
~jenny |
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