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My plesure My pain
Contributed by
no_1nos_me
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Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 08:10:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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My love, my hate
You know them both
You know my secrets
All but one
Dear you
(who will probly never see this)
Who has seen me through good and bad
Around you I'm happy, never sad
You've seen me upset but at you never mad
The ruth of the matter is I love you
I've known it for too long
But I know it just can't be
So though it kills me inside
There is where these feelings must hide
This love to my self I say, its a lie
This pain my hart I just wish it would die
Behind my lie I'm in a shell
With you I'm hevens bliss
But my lie makes me feel like hell
I love you it's true but
With a new blade I say good bey
I'll miss you, I'll love you,
Forever I'll cry
TO ALL GOODBYE
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Re: My plesure My pain
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by heartless_soul on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 08:18:29 PM AEST
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This is a very good poem, I like the style of it and it reads so well. I am sorry that you feel like this, and all I can say is just hold on things will get better. It wil help if you tell this person how you feel, maybe they feel the same. Do keep writing, it helps too. Be well.
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Re: My plesure My pain
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by Tiffyo4 on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 08:22:53 PM AEST
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dude i almost cryed
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Re: My plesure My pain
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by EvaLastingRose on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 08:30:01 PM AEST
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| ***** thats deep i can relate to this i love the opening too!!! awesome |
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Re: My plesure My pain
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by Mild_Tempest on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 12:32:59 AM AEST
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| Don't we all feel that way? |
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Re: My plesure My pain
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by WhyAmIHere on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 04:12:58 AM AEST
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| Good poem, sad, but good |
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Re: My plesure My pain
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 02:11:35 PM AEST
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you got your message across well.
Well done.
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