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Serendipical Moments
Contributed by
Caged Soul
on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 01:17:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A sense of privilege is what I felt
to have shared a space in this universe
with a being so perfect.
I felt shivers running up my spine-
Who is this, what can it be?
Is this what they call love at first sight?
I was in a safe place, safe space,
a safe state of mind.
The warmth of her soul blew down my neck
as I tried to make sense of it all.
The silence was broken by rumbling emotions
twirling my insides, I couldnt even be still.
She breathed with 1000 angel voices-
with it, she dispersed all my insecurities.
In her eyes I could see the future-
growing old and grand children, separated by a shadow.
Am I infatuated, or is it love?
Could it be love at first sight?
Could it be.
Damn, shes gone.
I dont even know her name.
Copyright ©
Caged Soul
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2006-03-29 01:17:14]
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Re: Serendipical Moments
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by rogergouldnc on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 02:15:32 AM AEST
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Very good.. I know that feeling oh so well.. in fact, if you want to know what you'd feel like if you had taken her home.. read "WOW"
Good write... it comes from a good place in you.... keep it coming
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Re: Serendipical Moments
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 03:59:45 AM AEST
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I really love this poem, Ash. Its a very nice write and it reminds me of something that happened to me once. I relate to it very well.
Thanks for a great poem.
Take care,
Tim
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Re: Serendipical Moments
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 07:57:06 AM AEST
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Nicely done! I like the ending, a good touch there.
I do believe in love at first sight... however I've not quite worked it out in my mind. And unfortunately I'm too wearied to do so tonight, so I will just have to save it.
Keep it up.
Andrew |
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