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True Passion
Contributed by
Heretic
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Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 03:15:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
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What is true passion?
Is passion something we create?
Is passion a natural instinct?
What is suffering?
This I can answer
Suffering is the soul being ripped apart by passion.
Suffering is a result of passion.
Passion is an emotion we create
Suffering is a result of this passion.
We despair over this.
We will always despair.
Destroy our passion and our suffering will remain.
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Re: True Passion
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 03:38:57 AM AEST
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wonderful
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Re: True Passion
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 06:35:10 AM AEST
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Passion is life, and life is also suffering. Good job tackling these hard subjects.
I would try to wear down on the number of words used, for example the word passion in the first few lines. It doesn't need to be repeated when it's still the subject. Brevity is important.
Keep it up.
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Re: True Passion
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by no_1nos_me on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 08:36:38 PM AEST
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| Great write I realy enjoyed it |
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Re: True Passion
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 08:41:49 PM AEST
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Passion is a degree of involvment. Life is both passion and suffering. He who had great passion suffered, gave us life everlasting.
Good right
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