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A Young Loves Thoughts
Contributed by
silver_runaway
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Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 10:51:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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He awoke to her warmth in his arms; she must have come in late
He looked down at the sleeping woman; emotion consumed him
His finger gently traced her face; she was beautiful
His eyes memorized every detail on her face; every freckle and every eyelash
She was his heart; his one true love
She had always been there for him; as far back as he could remember
Her eyes were dark; a chocolaty brown but almost black
Her skin was so smooth; softer than silk
His heart ached with emotion; he never wanted to let her go
His eyes blurred with tears; he had never felt love like this before
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Re: A Young Loves Thoughts
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 07:55:54 AM AEST
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A very sweet look at real love.
Nicley done!
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Re: A Young Loves Thoughts
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by ever1der on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 11:19:43 AM AEST
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sweet and filled with love that comes through in your writing. very nice.
mary |
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