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Chimaera Love
Contributed by
eleventoedsloth
on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 04:43:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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With bright colors
and
batting eyelashes,
he lures
weak-hearted pray.
With sweet talk
and sharp claws,
he tares down defense walls,
and digs holes through
the thickest egos.
A sick sixth sense
smells vulnerability,
and he lunges
at the necks of
the overly trusting.
Alliterations
and metaphors bleed
from deep gashes,
but it's no consolation.
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eleventoedsloth
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2006-03-29 16:43:46]
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Re: Chimaera Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by felicitous on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 07:26:35 AM AEST
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Alliterations
and metaphors bleed
from deep gashes,
but it's no consolation...
I love those lines. I can relate. Thanks for wording my thoughts so eloquently. |
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Re: Chimaera Love
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by Anazasi420 on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 01:54:26 AM AEST
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| Yeah...nice Alliterations and Metaphors, "A sick sixth sense smells," I like the twists in meaning with each line too...Nice... |
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