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desert flower
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 07:23:14 PM in AEST
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i was wandering the desert one day when i found you
a flower so beautiful even in your dying
i stopped to look and couldn't help my crying
and it seems my tears were healing
but i'm sorry my dear i am no thunderstorm
i am just a passing cloud
and i tried to carry you to safety
but your stem was full of thorns
i came to realize that you weren't dying
but simply mourning
it seems your misery is what sustains you
you live for the sun that kills you
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2006-03-29 19:23:14]
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Re: desert flower
(User Rating: 1 )
by twick on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 08:14:02 PM AEST
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I really liked this one. I don't know what else to say. It was great
My fav lines:
but your stem was full of thorns
you live for the sun that kills you |
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Re: desert flower
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 08:53:36 PM AEST
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A gentle tender poem, it moved my heart, I felt the urge to shed a tear. Wonderful write
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