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as i sleep
Contributed by
Tiffyo4
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Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 07:27:35 PM in AEST
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as i lay there sleeping
the thoughts that pass my mind
why is she doing this to me
does she really want me to die
my heart is breaking and my
eyes can no longer cry
my soul can no longer weep
my body can't take any more pain
all i wanted was for us to be friends
she don't want me she doesn't
even care weither i live or die
the walls are as black as her heart
my eyes as red as the bllod on the floor
disappear into the night like
a bat in flight screams coming outta know where
she just forgot my bleeding heart
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Re: as i sleep
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by Jen54 on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 07:57:13 PM AEST
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| Great write. I like it a lot. |
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Re: as i sleep
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by no_1nos_me on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 08:05:14 PM AEST
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| nice write young BLLOD |
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