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AS IF
Contributed by
Tiffyo4
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Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 08:02:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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AS IF YOU SAID YOU LOVED ME
AS IF I SAY THE SAME
AS IF YOU WOULD KISS ME
WOULD I BE THE ONE TO BLAME
AS IF MY HEART DOESN'T GET BROKEIN
AS IF MY EYES DON'T CRY
AS IF I DON'T FEEL LIKE SCREAMING
AS IF I DON'T WANNA DIE
I KEEP SHEDING MY OWN BLOOD
AND WHO KNOWS WHY
AS IF YOU SAY YOU WANT ME
I JUST SAY YOU LIED
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Tiffyo4
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2006-03-29 20:02:26]
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Re: AS IF
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 08:43:07 PM AEST
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great! it's honest and that's the way a good poem
should be... as well, i hope everything works out for
you and that you keep up the fine writing
I KEEP SHEDING MY OWN BLOOD
AND WHO KNOWS WHY
AS IF YOU SAY YOU WANT ME
I JUST SAY YOU LIED
powerful. |
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Re: AS IF
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by AnastasiaN on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 01:12:56 AM AEST
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| i agree very simple and almost whimsical but gets to the point and i like that type of writing...that's brief and the message is clear...awesome poem and i think i've said the same things a time or two. |
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