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That I really am........
Contributed by
summer
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Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 10:26:49 PM in AEST
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you with your black heart and emerald eyes
you with that transparent smile that doesn't reach your eyes
I hope i burn myself into your memory like a scar from boiling oil...
That you see my name on road signs and magazines and women you lust after
That for once in your life you regret something...
I was blinded, distracted lulled by exciting tales believable lies and fast cars...
If i'm nice, if i take it, if i do as he wants he'll always love me...
playing jesus and mother theresa to a man twice my age
Fooling myself pressing self destruct ..yet again
light vs. dark
bad boy/good girl
opposites attract
was i too much for you?
All tight leather
see through lace
red lipstick
long curls
Whorish suspenders
(like a trussed up turkey..)
did it hurt your ego that people knew my name and not yours?
that you weren't by far my best lay?
or maybe it was
That i didn't need you for your fast cars or your exciting tales
I didn't need you at all....
That really I am
All Pyjamas
odd socks
no make up
shakespeare
and hugs
You said I was an enigma,
If I'm really honest you were always an open book to me..
So why is it then that i still want to burn myself onto your memory like a scar from boiling oil...
that I hope that you see my name on road signs and magazines and women you lust after
And That for once in your life you regret something...?
Copyright ©
summer
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2006-03-29 22:26:49]
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Re: That I really am........
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 10:39:39 PM AEST
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| i love this....and it's because we want to hurt them like they hurt us...and it seems the one way to do that is to make them regret something..because they are pigs and seemingly nothing can get to them..because we are just .another lay.....but see here's the thing...they do regret....they just have this show they put on..this mask....and we are the only ones who really know because though they won't admit it they have slipped up around us..when its just you and him...he slips up and removes the mask..but only in the darkness of you and him..and so noone else will ever know..and he regrets it...regrets losing you..you just won't know it unless you get the chance to be in that darkness with just you and him again.... |
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Re: That I really am........
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 12:16:52 AM AEST
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Great write, very well expressed , i love this poem
LG |
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Re: That I really am........
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 10:56:25 AM AEST
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| burnt a hole in my memory this poem. |
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Re: That I really am........
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 03:11:13 PM AEST
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A great poem, it's deep.
Take care.
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