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arrowhead
Contributed by
danimus
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Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 01:46:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Mind spins like a wheel of fortune
Thoughts are mint but running thin
I am an arrowhead
Rrecise; sharp with moral
Tonight I win; shoot through
Freeway signs
Desire does not defeat my mind
No stopping
While my eyes does the walking
These inches feel like miles
Not tripping over styles
These eyes are alert
Looking out for evil in disguise
My soul will not convert
Mind is the sun
Solution to the world thats spun
Upside down
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2006-03-30 13:46:32]
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Re: arrowhead
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by SmileSkinDeep on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 06:17:57 PM AEST
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| This is an interesting write. Its simple but I like how you talk about spinning in the first and last lines. |
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