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Alone
Contributed by
Amaterian_Angel
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Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 02:17:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Silent screams that no one hears
And no one will see my falling tears
The cuts so deep I want to make
The mirrors & windows I want to break
But alone and silent I must suffer
What doesnt kill me will make me tougher
To everyone Im calm and oh so glad
But deep, deep down Im angry and sad
Dont want them to see that side of me
That deep down inside I dont want to be
I dont want them to know that I hate them so
That behind each high is a horrible low
That I cry myself to sleep each and every night
My tears and hate are all out of sight
Some who know beg me to talk
But Id rather be alone, Id rather walk
I dont want to talk when I get like this
I dont want to stop when I turn like this
Just leave me to turn to dust and bone
Just let me fade into a world unknown
Its so much easier being angry and sad
Its so much easier just being alone.
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Re: Alone
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by Teddy on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 05:04:54 AM AEST
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| thats really good for someone who couldnt sleep. i like it. |
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Re: Alone
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by Nothingness on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 12:59:24 PM AEST
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| loved it awesome write |
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Re: Alone
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 10:16:00 PM AEST
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The rhyming here has a lot of integrity, because there aren't weird words and/or sentence structures like so often is the case with rhyming poems. This says what it wants to, without being subverted to its styling. Well done, honest and well-penned.
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