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These Doors
Contributed by
worldsenigma
on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 12:54:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I have no clue what is going on at first we were friends and nothing more but as the time flew by like birds in the sky traveling on the wind so up high somewhere along that ride you opened a door and when that door was opened your feelings came flying out and i took a step in and it was then that i realized i had a responsibility like the oldest bird who now owns the skys because his mother was shot down yes I had a new identity to be the one who catches your tears as you cried the one who makes you smile time after time yet somehow you feel that you still have feelings inside you laugh and you smile yet your still in denial like a bird refusing to fly you've opened you door i've entered your world what feelings remain inside? has nothing changed do i still remain as a lost bird who's mother is dead am i simply confused from being abused by this fantasy inside of my head? as i struggle to get past these questions i ask i look ahead hoping for more and there lies my answer standing so tall another padlocked door.
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Re: These Doors
(User Rating: 1 ) by FRANCO on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 05:08:41 AM AEST (User
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Your poem certainly is flying high like those birds in the sky. Good work keep it up.
FRANCO
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