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Lost in the Fog
Contributed by
DarkFaerie
on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 01:25:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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sobs rack through
my frail shivering form
my heart pounds
my heart throbs
i dont know what
im doing
im so lost
i need guidance
i need someone
to pull me out of
this fog
im encased by
i cant sleep
i cant eat
this pain
consumes me whole
my heart
nailed to the wall
with 9 inch spikes
this is the pain i feel
CAN you change?
CAN i forget?
so lost and afraid
i sit and ponder my future
scared to decide
scared to leave
my happy little bubble
scared to run to you
and only find the past
its like im not even here
im living someone elses life
and i have ****** it up so badly
Copyright ©
DarkFaerie
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2006-04-02 13:25:32]
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Re: Lost in the Fog
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by purplestary on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 02:02:07 PM AEST
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| this is powerful..so emotional. the emotions are so raw and clear...i can feel it. this is a great write. |
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Re: Lost in the Fog
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by holderofthestone on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 02:51:21 PM AEST
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| I can still be your lighthouse... great write i can feel your anguish... |
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Re: Lost in the Fog
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 11:26:43 PM AEST
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This poem reveals so much of you and your inner torment. a sincere write with depth and conviction. I hope things get better for you.
Ben |
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Re: Lost in the Fog
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by artjunkiekyle on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 11:54:13 PM AEST
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you truly have a phenomenal talent and i love the way that you write and that flow of easiness that goes with it. If you get the chance to read some of my stuff, i would really appreciate.
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