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Those who got away unfulfilled
Contributed by
holstein
on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 06:27:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Every so often in this aging circle of land
falling teardrops sheds upon a nightstand
to the sound of the drowning of loneliness,
and like an eye reflected flame of happiness burning unlit
they lie all soulful and scattered amid
outdated pulses and feelings stirred to fit the present,
craving for a time that will never reign; nor did,
and I, this voices shadowy twin, is alike them,
always dwelling on threadbare silhouettes of back then,
like a lover of life unmatched and veiled in bloody feathers
I lie swathed and furled within vacant space
silent and heavy as a rock,
now, touching my skin
pure and thin,
looking within
bare and vastly untouched,
now, warmth pulling me up
sudden stop,
coldness from above
mouth opening up
lips drops.
Stilness abides the clicking of time
catering down the last passing lanes
the approach of rapid decline.
Closed eyes, head imploding, thundering flashes
her eyes, her smile, her mouth - STOP.
Epiphany - birth, life , live love, lost
pupils widening, rush, agony, silence.
Couldn't stay,
those who got away
unfulfilled
Copyright ©
holstein
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2006-04-03 18:27:29]
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Re: Those who got away unfulfilled
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by trini on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 06:35:31 PM AEST
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Nice write. The words seemed a bit uncoordinated but the message was made quite nicely. I enjoyed the poem.
Keep up the good work.
-Trini |
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Re: Those who got away unfulfilled
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 06:41:40 PM AEST
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| well done , I enjoyed the read. |
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