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Your lies
Contributed by
Somnium
on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 05:54:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Four walls strangulate
My fears dissapate
Hard to evaluate
your lies
Secret passion knows
Scarlet life blood flows
Your love never goes
and dies
My hands fall away
You never saw this day
Your love crawls away
and cries
Posters tell me how
Trees my lovers now
So defined my brow
in size
Forest of regret
Won't return I'll bet
Now I'll never let
you die
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Somnium
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2006-04-04 17:54:26]
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Re: Your lies
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by Lady_Daisy on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 10:18:54 PM AEST
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| Well written, I enjoyed reading I especially liked the line. "Scarlet life blood flows". |
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