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Burning Jade
Contributed by
TiaXander
on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 09:56:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Whole bits
pieces of my life
The pain and agony
Intense heat of reality
The constant reminder
Of not knowing
Slowly suddenly
I begin to recall
So vivid and painful
The fresh wounds
Still open
Bleeding, burning
It wont stop flowing
The scars keep coming
Jaded bits in black and white
This has become my life
Copyright ©
TiaXander
... [
2006-04-04 21:56:03]
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Re: Burning Jade
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by TiaXander on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 10:00:25 PM AEST
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| arhh wont lemme post more than one! anyhow plz let me know wht you think....lolz even if it is flames. |
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Re: Burning Jade
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by marichris on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 10:56:39 PM AEST
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well put poem... and i love how you end it..like summing it up... its effective as being an "anguish poetry" since the words reflects every feeling it intends to present
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Re: Burning Jade
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by flamingblade on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 02:44:10 PM AEST
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| you did good on this |
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