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beautiful forever...
Contributed by
ibelieve-dreamsonhorizon
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Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 09:25:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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another beautiful day beneath a cloudless sky, beside a sea of azure purity a heart glows brighter that the sun
reaching into it i pulled out a handful of glimmering sand, i took a breath from the sweet sunlight that leans against me
under the radiating sun, grains of sand twinkle like sparkling tears of joy that break the lonely winter cold once and for all
slowly i reach out... i touched the halcyon water with the tip of my finger
in the reflection i see through myself and beyond it i sense the presence of clarity where my soul belongs
as the i stood my gaze raced toward the horizon where it halted with childish curiosity and hope
my heart recomposes itself in equanimity as i gather up the pieces
my mind fixes itself on the incandescently effulgent spot that stands out from the rest
then the moment holds itself in tranquilty as i open my palms
i plunge forward into the sea
i propel myself forward
i see the light ahead...
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Re: beautiful forever...
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by kiss4roq on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 12:28:25 PM AEST
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| Such an emotional poet. I love this poem. It conveyed some real emotion. Thanks for the poem. Have a great day. |
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Re: beautiful forever...
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by Emmanuel on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 02:30:54 PM AEST
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| Great style, but a little to wordy |
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