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The Day I died...
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 03:09:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Did it hurt the day you died?
Yeah...it did
I can feel the rain running off the side
of that building.
The one we did things in
But I don't see it much anymore,
maybe you do.
It's empty and we're gone
Now you're with her
and I'm with him.
I'm happy now, right?
Yeah it hurt when I died
thrown off the edge of a rooftop
my eyes running with tears
and I crashed into the pavement
body shattered and smashed
that's my lovely ending
as you gazed down
to make sure I closed my eyes
and didn't open them again...
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Inevitable
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2006-04-05 15:09:25]
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Re: The Day I died...
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by sandypoet on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 03:52:03 PM AEST
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Your not in a good mood today are you.
As I picture the best I can,
Each word you typed like a pen,
I looked down and saw laying there,
I cried and cried the many tears,
Get up I like to shout,
Get up and wipe off this crap,
Stand up again and smile,
Because you have a friend in me,
For a little while.
God will to if you let him be,
That is truth.. a reality. |
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Re: The Day I died...
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 05:49:02 PM AEST
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Well-expressed lyric. I like the imagery, and how you rely on it to convey your feelings. Nicely done.
Andrew |
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