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Pale Winter Moon
Contributed by
kidnic
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Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 06:05:42 PM in AEST
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Hung in the sky, there's a pale winter moon;
Shining so bright, the night's lit up like noon.
And sitting here, while I contemplate my life,
I let out a breath, letting go of my strife.
The warm air condenses, and moisture is seen,
A wisp of my life completes the glorious scene.
But where is the heat, the life, or the passion?
Here in the cold, heat is something you ration.
Frigid air blows, turning my skin into hills;
It takes all I have to fight the ominous chills.
And staring upward, through the white-washed blue,
I think, "Spring is coming, where everything's new."
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kidnic
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2006-04-05 18:05:42]
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Re: Pale Winter Moon
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by Kimberlynn on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 08:43:22 PM AEST
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| Whoa, its so pretty and vivid. I like, your so discriptive. |
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Re: Pale Winter Moon
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by mazeof_darkness on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 09:37:22 PM AEST
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| Every line i read, i could see it all play out in my head. You express you feelings so brilliantly!!!! Wonderful write. |
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