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shameful addiction
Contributed by
_unknown_
on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 07:06:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Out of control
It's to much to take,
What do you see?
I'm perfectly fake.
I lift the blade
My hearts beating fast,
As im telling myself
This times the last.
I cant escape,
I need to hide,
The only cure
For the pain inside.
No one understands,
And no one can see,
The troubles i have
Striving to be me.
The problems at home,
The battle inside,
Fake smiles within
No where to hide.
Over and over
Each day is the same.
The calmness within
Puts me to shame.
Copyright ©
_unknown_
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2006-04-05 19:06:53]
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Re: shameful addiction
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by heartless_soul on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 07:41:55 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC hop eyou have fun here. OMG, that was writien so well, its flow and rhyming were used very well, it had such imagery that you could see what you were saying. I am sorry if this is how you truly feel and hope that you will be okay soon. do keep up the good work (it helps to get through tough times and strugles. Be well.
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Re: shameful addiction
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by Tiffyo4 on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 12:45:42 PM AEST
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very very nice poem hope to read more from you
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