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The Archangel
Contributed by
Alison
on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 09:38:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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As I walked down the empty halls, Down the echoing stairway, My head down and my ear phones in, When suddenly as by chance, A young man sat there on my way, His hands on his face, Tears rolling down to his knees, I stop, ear phones out, Bending down I whisper, Im sorry, but are you ok? I had to catch my breathe, And I almost fall back, For when he lifted his head up, His warm face so heavenly, Eyes bluer then the sky, His hair brighter then the sun, Face purer then the clouds. When he looked at me, I felt faint, Im lost he gently sang, Where are you going? I barely breathed, Im looking for someone, He softly said, Who? You he said so beautifully, What do you mean, I cried, Standing up, Took my hands in his, Looked me the eye, You are beautiful, Inside you always care, Come back to your father, For you have always been loved, Loud ringing in my ears, My heart stopped for sure, He must be crazy, But so must I, Because I cant disbelieved, Thats all Ive ever needed to know, You will be loved here dear one. With that he let go, One second later, He vanished, Wait, no wait, come back, I yelled .Please.. No thats all I need to feel, Now on my knees, I stood to my feet Wiped away my tears, Prayed a prayer of thanks, Walking on, Knowing that once again, He had come to me, Once again I heard, Gabrielratchet, One of the seven, An archangel, Being the one of good tidings, Yet I would have missed, If I had simply had walked around him.
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Re: The Archangel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 01:15:19 AM AEST (User
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This is very beautiful indeed and i'm not religious so you can count on this comment being on the level. A most touching and sincere display of benevolance if ever there was. You write lovely. *****
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Re: The Archangel
(User Rating: 1 ) by chaos78 on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 01:44:20 AM AEST (User
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beautiful write, beautiful read i love it very much |
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Re: The Archangel
(User Rating: 1 ) by whiteleo1984 on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 02:35:26 AM AEST (User
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beautifully written, awesome image... it makes u wonder just how low He has been sitting there waiting for u 2 c Him... |
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