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Walking with you
Contributed by
pureheart07
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Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 05:29:58 AM in AEST
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ChristianPoetry
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Walking With You
All my life I will walk with you
You will also always walk with me.
Trough the times of life when answer could not befound.
I was there under your wing walking with you & taking your guidnce.
When tears flowed down these cheeks.
You where there to cliam & comfort me.
I know your the truth.
Your here know still giving me your guidnce comfort & love.
How you love one so wrothless I don't know.
How I love one so mighty with all my heart is beyond me.
You are wrothy of all things, but not me i dersve at the least the wrorst,
Yet you still teart me like a wrothy person & a chosen person of all things.
How I have beseated you & broke your heart so many times, but you still love me.
My utter trust lies in you.
Any thing I'am to become will only be thow you.
For you are not my God, but everyones & they should love there God.
God I wish I will do all the things you want me to.
I wish you would open the doors for me to.
God this my plea & confussing of love for all to see.
God your love will never change for me.
When the day comes that I see your face,
I will bow to you my King & I will for ever keep my loyality to you.
For after all you are mighty & will not speare to show your might.
For after all you are the King of all things.
Now I bow humbley at your feet & you
place your srowd from shoulder to shoulder saying "Arise princess"
Even thow I'am so unwrothy to be one.
I'm unwrothy of this power unwrothy of this life even.
Why you chose me to be chosen I only wish I knew.
God if this is the density you have set for me then allow me to fill it.
My King Lord & God I'am your sevarent.
That you chose to make royality.
The duties you lay be for will be done beyound my best.
For that is all I can do for a King of such geart & wonderfull power.
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Re: Walking with you
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by dougnut on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 09:31:17 AM AEST
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Thanks for sharing this heartfelt beautiful
prayer poem
God Bless You.
Doug:-) |
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Re: Walking with you
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by Archie on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 10:57:04 AM AEST
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| It is hard for me to say how I really feel about your poem so i will say it is good. There is something generic about it though like something i have heard in a song. I think that is one thing that takes away from your poem. It is a good prayer and maybe your words were inspired by a song I get inspiration from songs too. I just wanted to be honest and not give you a generic statement that was dishonest and did not reflect a genuine heart toward what you wrote. |
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