|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Morning, Sunshine
Contributed by
twick
on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 08:08:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
Put on your spectacles mastermind
time to get down to business.
What spectacle will it be today?
What has influenced your pretty little head of late?
I've been waiting for something new.
Bored to tears with nothing to do
So I ask
What's the new tune?
Tell me what's plaguing you
I gage what's in me with what's seen in you
and I act like what you want me to.
Amazing I think
Sometimes thinking the same beat
but I'll not take credit for what I see.
We are not the same I know we are not
but in all the words I sometimes forgot.
It's never long so don't ever worry.
I write with speed in constant hurry
If I try to calculate that emotional state
It's lost, gone,
runaway.
I have tricks and ploys I use
to protect what's easy to bruise
So bespectacled boy
is it time to make some noise
cause some ruckus worth nothing
but still fun, enjoy!
Copyright ©
twick
... [
2006-04-06 20:08:58]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Morning, Sunshine
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kimberlynn on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 08:51:23 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Nice word use, I really like it. It sounds just like a song, I thought you wrote it beautifully. |
|
|
Re: Morning, Sunshine
(User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 11:51:35 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| nice peice of work, open to many interpretations which is always a bonus i think, nice rythmn, well done :-) |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
