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Empty
Contributed by
Amazon
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Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 10:20:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I wonder down an empty street
middle of the day and not a soul I meet
I walk up to an empty house not a creature inside
everythings gone not a place to hide
not a thing on the shelves or the walls
except for the blood streaking down
everything takes on an un-natural hue
and the only thing that fills my mind is memories of you
oh how different things could have bin
now I dont know if youre alive or dead
yet you still haunt me night and day
oh why cant you just go away
I take a step down the hall
just want to stand there and scream out loud
for all the pains of my past
are coming to the surface at last
I must continue to fight
cant let this consume me
im getting drawn under
feel like im drowning
and then you come along
you grad my hand
you fight against the pull
and release me from despair
you refuse to give up on me
what have I done to make me so lucky
for I know in my heart I do not deserve you
but I also know not with out you id do
sometimes I wonder if you were nothing but a dream
cause its all to goog to be true what else could it be?
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Re: Empty
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by drtylilsecret on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 02:49:27 PM AEST
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good write, i liked it, the grammar mistakes seemed to draw away from the poem, but good beginning, sorta tortured-soul type thing it seemed to me.
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