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Promise Me
Contributed by
Carmen
on
Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It's your mind you make it
It's my heart
If your real I'll allow you to take it
Just as long as you promise
You'll never break it
Promise me you'll always be there
And never ever will I doubt that you care
Promise me you'll never lie or pretend
And our love will never ever come to an end
Forever will be ours to take
Because my heart
You promised you'd never break
Copyright ©
Carmen
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2003-02-01 22:00:00]
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Re: Promise Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 03:17:04 PM AEST
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some of the rhymes seemed a little forced and whatnot,
but otherwise i loved it!
beautiful!
- Bethani - |
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