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under the glass - THE THOUGHTS OF THE SOME POINT AND THE BURNING MATCH
Contributed by
SA_RA
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Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 07:33:54 AM in AEST
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a tiny sparkles like un embryo of something small
lamento in his rhythm
in the meantime
when the small flame finishing his own fire
and slowly slippery down
and everything get so empty
when she gather together tearful crystalls
and this bunch was belong just to her
and the waves concerned by the little reminiscences
and the small flame is shivering
and searching for a free way
and all things became out of reach
and here is not the end
but nevertheless stopp
the glimmering turbidity walls
faces are blurin
when you sink the story about one past
but the small flame didn't found extint soul
outside is snowing
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SA_RA
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2002-07-27 07:33:54]
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Re: under the glass - THE THOUGHTS OF THE SOME POINT AND THE BURNING MATCH
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by SeXyDrAgOn on
Tuesday, 27th August 2002 @ 11:57:42 AM AEST
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| whoa... I've read this about 10 times in the last 10 minutes and Im just not catching on, I think I know what you are saying, but wow. I think it's a good write, but I wouldn't mind some explanation...lol... |
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Re: under the glass - THE THOUGHTS OF THE SOME POINT AND THE BURNING MATCH
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by SeXyDrAgOn on
Tuesday, 27th August 2002 @ 12:01:49 PM AEST
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There I go shooting my mouth off without looking into things. I now know that you were translating it into English which explains some of the confusion, but it s a little more understandable now that I know. Good job...lol
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Re: under the glass - THE THOUGHTS OF THE SOME POINT AND THE BURNING MATCH
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by SA_RA on
Thursday, 17th October 2002 @ 06:51:11 PM AEST
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Sorry, I'm so late with my answer..but anyway...thanks for yours opinian, it's make me glad!
I know that translate is not the same like us
original and beleive me, this make me a little sad, because I can't do it better.
Thanks again and Have a great time!
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