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i thought i was done
Contributed by
candyistoo-sweet
on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 05:24:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I freaking thought I was done
You tell me that Im pretty; Im the one
I fall for all your charm and wit
Im delusional for thinking I could handle this *****
I am scared out of my ******* mind
I want to run far away, I want to out-run time
Maybe I wont have to commit
If I tell you the truth, I am really scared of it
I fear to be crazy and in love like all those stupid whores
I want to be sane like I was when I was puking in bowls
When I was on things I couldnt pronounce
When I got so drunk, that I thought I could bounce
When I jumped off that house with all my stupid friends
And john broke his leg when it hit that stupid fence
But he was too big for me and Michelle to carry
I went to get help while I was laughing, it was scary
But I was so numb and didnt notice I was caught
Trespassing and being arrested couldnt get me out
Get me out of this life that was full of mistakes
Let me do over all those times I was baked
If I could learn how to live normal when I was young
Maybe I wouldnt be scared to hear words roll off your tongue
I wouldnt be scared to love your stupid face
I wouldnt be scared to leave this world without a trace
But I dont want to break your heart I care too much
I dont know why, I dont even like like myself much
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Re: i thought i was done
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by mischild on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 05:36:06 AM AEST
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Re: i thought i was done
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by Tiffyo4 on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 12:33:02 PM AEST
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nice picture
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Re: i thought i was done
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 04:09:45 PM AEST
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WELCOME SANDY TO YPDC!
We are so glad to have a board!
This was a wonderful and expressive poem. You laid your feelings bare, and of course for poets that's not rare!
Good work Sandy............keep it up!
Warm love and Good Luck to you........keep commenting on everyone's poems so they will know you are here!
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