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Sorrows Eyes
Contributed by
Penguindave
on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 06:02:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I see her face, always in mind,
Through golden fields, on summers sky,
I dream of her, with hand in mine,
Though days have past, a wondrous time.
I see her face, I watch TV,
My mind consumed, by memory,
I pray for her, on lonely days,
I brave the storm, but still I pain.
I see her face, on river free,
It sails away, too summon me,
I think of her, the times we spent,
I miss the days, that heaven sent.
I see her face, as I sleep,
When I awake, my heart sits deep,
I long for her, here by my side,
Then dry the tears, from sorrows eyes.
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Penguindave
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2006-04-08 06:02:04]
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Re: Sorrows Eyes
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by FRANCO on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 07:33:09 AM AEST
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Dear friend,I know how you feel becauseIam not a strenger to this feeling; I too sail in the same sorrowful boat.
Let the flame of love burn brighter then ever - speak out your heart louder then ever before, let the angels in heaven sing along with you.
beautifully poem, I loved reading it.
FRANCO.
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Re: Sorrows Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 09:53:04 AM AEST
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A very heart felt write, with enough beauty to capture any reader. The opening couplet was exquisite. Well done.
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Re: Sorrows Eyes
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by Tiffyo4 on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 12:30:53 PM AEST
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i like it alot very good write
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