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DEATH IS BETTER FOR ME
Contributed by
Tiffyo4
on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 12:42:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I would rather lay in a pool of my own blood
then to look her in the face again
she broke my heart and wants
me to surrender to her again
she made me the way i am
always waiting for death
instead of wanting to live
why did you do this to me
i can't be me with her alive
i've hurt myself enough
now it her turn to hurt
bleed and scream
leave me be just
let me be free
your no better then porsha
always takeing but never givein
so i leave this earth
hurting because of you
bleeding my own blood
and not being able to
breath again
Copyright ©
Tiffyo4
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2006-04-08 12:42:00]
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Re: DEATH IS BETTER FOR ME
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by Syloss on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 01:03:05 PM AEST
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Re: DEATH IS BETTER FOR ME
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 05:19:35 PM AEST
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Very touching poem my guess is your young if u are time is on your side make the best of it and try not 2 let any one difine your life. Yes your heart will get crushed but while your writting this there off hurting some one else, now are they worth it? you've given enough don't also give them your life, cause beleive it or not, in time u won't even give this moment a thought. Great passion in this poem and well presented, all the best 2 you . . .
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Re: DEATH IS BETTER FOR ME
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 01:03:04 AM AEST
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Friend perhaps you have closed your eyes because of your aching love, friend open you eyes this world is not as dark and gloomy as you assume so, learn to live and experience every moment of your life which is not yours but belongs to your creator, you are just a care taker so take good care of it because you will have to give an account of it.
It is GOOD yet a painful poem.
FRANCO
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