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Word from Within
Contributed by
SoulTorn2Pieces
on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 05:52:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Words from Withibn
by: Dana
2005
My beating Heart
A Black hollow Holow Hole
Lost & Tormented
Sorrow Drained
Soul
Lacking
Self Control...............
Inner Walls built
over years
to keep in the Cold
Denial & Fear Freeze
My World....
Done with Irrelevance
Relating 2 Intolerance,
Despising my Ignorance,
and
Lack of Reverance,
Long ago,
gave up on
Perseverance & Incompetence
So, I try to go on,
in my
Shame filled existance
Lacking
CADENCE...............
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SoulTorn2Pieces
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2006-04-08 17:52:03]
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Re: Word from Within
(User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 10:29:47 AM AEST
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This was a good poem.. I had to read it a couple times as well because like you had said it is deep. It was written well. Deep and very good..
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christina |
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Re: Word from Within
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by musicXisXlife on
Friday, 14th September 2007 @ 01:34:32 PM AEST
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It's good. I like it.
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