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Untitled
Contributed by
luckedout
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Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 09:23:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I tell you what I feel
and you ask your friends
Do you need their thoughts
to make your perhaps?
I dont understand what you mean
when you say maybe
Dont you just know if its yes or no?
Are you protecting my pride
and preparing me for no?
or will you say nothing
and just let it go?
Though I wish you wouldnt
I just want to know
would you just give me a chance
or at least a yes or a no?
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luckedout
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2006-04-08 21:23:02]
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Re: Untitled
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by onceandagain on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 01:06:25 PM AEST
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| This is a good write. I can follow where you are going with this one, it sounds like someone is leading you on. You have questions that need answering, but you are recieving none. I'ts good to put down on paper what is in your heart. Good job. |
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