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In the Darkness
Contributed by
devilcat
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Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 08:20:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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in the darkness
there it lies
creepy feelings
that one strives
to run away
and leave to forget
but the darkness reviels
the things you met
from all your ages
the darkness grows
until the day
it overflows
when this nightmare
swallows you up
you go away
into the devils cup
you will not remember
the life you had
for in the darkness
everthing's just mad
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2006-04-09 08:20:39]
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Re: In the Darkness
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by Faust on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 09:24:55 PM AEST
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The words and imagery are very good but it feels a little rushed.
Eternally Punished,
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