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you don't know... but i will let my heart show you
Contributed by
ibelieve-dreamsonhorizon
on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 02:13:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
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maybe it's me
but i think it's you
as far as my dreams can see
it's you and me
i was lost once but you've rescued me from my fall
i was blind once but now i see
i do know this much
one day i will be with you
cause my heart is already with you
since the day i saw you
by a chance destined to come across
i've walked countless miles through the hell
and i've been to the heaven for a short while
then i know why my soul longs you so dear
for the first time in my life
i know you are the fire that i've been searching all along
to light my inmost part of my soul
i thank you
yet you don't know
for we are seperated by 10000 miles
but i believe that you will know
after i walk through thorny path to be get to you
you will see that i'm made for you
for my heart was saved three times by you
i thank you
do you still believe in love? - i still do
i believe - my dreams are on the horizon where you and i belong
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Re: you don't know... but i will let my heart show you
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 02:33:04 PM AEST
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Good job!
Keep Writing.
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Re: you don't know... but i will let my heart show you
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by Lilly-Quill on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 03:29:52 PM AEST
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God this sounds so familiar.
"for we are separated by 10000 miles
but I believe that you will know
after I walk through thorny path to be get to you
you will see that I’m made for you..."
Great title, and a most intriguing view.
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Re: you don't know... but i will let my heart show you
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by TiaXander on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 09:10:58 PM AEST
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| Huh well cant say this doesn't sound familiar the story your poem tells....Very precise and hits all the right feelings. |
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