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Fervor
Contributed by
MystycLore
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Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 04:57:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Passion comes at a price
It comes from deep within
It is not a hallmark moment
It comes from the soul
An aged soul that has lived
I have seen
Inconceivable cruelty
I have felt
Contemptuous cold
I have fought
Arduous demons
Through it all
I yearned for me
In the quiet air
Fervor commanded more
I was asked
To rise above
To find the truth
To share desire
I see what matters most
I want a single moment
To share my visions
Unbridled I explore verse
Given the time
I will walk beside you
Let me irradiate your soul
Feel for a moment
A tender kiss
A slight touch
Let light and passion
Guide your path
Dance with me
Create lasting memories
They will carry on
Long after
I am gone
September 24, 2005
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MystycLore
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2006-04-09 16:57:19]
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Re: Fervor
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by JGB on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 10:24:25 PM AEST
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Riveting!
I'm on the verge of tears. Beautiful! |
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Re: Fervor
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 05:11:38 AM AEST
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Well-worded and formatted. This gives it a fine flow, and the theme and feeling are nicely done as well.
Andrew |
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