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surely
Contributed by
sillysal
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Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 05:49:01 PM in AEST
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Its beginning
the last of Earths days
surely
everyone living has heard that phrase
wearily, worn
some folks have sworn
they need a sad face to dwell in these days
There is delight
in Jesus smile
surely
to follow His example mile-by-mile
will make us glow
whereer we go
though some say Hes dead theyre in denial
Crucified, died,
horrid, gory
surely
everyone knows that Biblical story
old prophecy
filled brilliantly
when He returns it will be in glory
Dead, He arose
said we could follow
surely
everyone wants paradise, no sorrow
kneel, on your knees
ask Him to please
take you to paradise some tomorrow
The last inning
is beginning
surely
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2006-04-09 17:49:01]
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Re: surely
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 06:24:20 PM AEST
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when He returns … it will be in glory
Thank you so much for this poem, love made visible.
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Re: surely
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 05:17:24 AM AEST
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This has a fine message, and was said well. The opening words are catchy, and that's a good thing for a poem to have.
I disagree with faith being catagorized as belief without doubt, though. It's belief through periods of doubt, based in the understanding that we have very insufficient sight. Aye, there's belief without doubt, but only at the beginning, and then once we see the doubt through.
Keep writing, and God bless.
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