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conflict of interests
Contributed by
guiltycircles
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Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 05:59:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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with murderous intentions you drove me to the edge
but with only a little push, it was YOU who walked off the ledge
does your conscience dob you in?
will your deeper devil always win?
what was your intention when you took that final leap
it was MY demons in your head, quietly we creep
dodging your attempts at sanity
you make grabs for me but i am to slimy
cheap and nasty deviations
is what you suffer for all your temptations
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2006-04-09 17:59:03]
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Re: conflict of interests
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by trini on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 08:12:39 PM AEST
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Dark poetry never seems so clear to me.
I really liked the way you wrote this.
A tonic for the mind. Quite refreshing in my opinion.
Keep up the excellent work
-Trini |
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Re: conflict of interests
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by twick on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 09:17:52 PM AEST
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the words really captured me. Great job.
Fav phrases:
"quietly we creep"
"you make grabs for me but I am to slimy" |
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Re: conflict of interests
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 09:29:57 PM AEST
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I read this twice and it really captured me from the beginning.
I have never read anything quite the same as this before, and I like your creativity.
Good message.
Well done.
Great write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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