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The Long Lonely Road
Contributed by
tVirus
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Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 07:29:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The long lonely road
Since I was a baby, its all I've ever known
It's where I was raised,
These streets made me,
So only they can break me.
Thats the house when you became my lady.
Thats the back alley where I went crazy.
Inner struggle, but it never shows....
But I keep walkin' the wrong side...
...of this long lonely road
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tVirus
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2006-04-09 19:29:18]
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Re: The Long Lonely Road
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 09:23:24 PM AEST
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I couldn't really see this as a rap, but I think it makes a really good poem.
Especially those last two lines, they stood out to me all the way through the write, and I think they were the best in the whole thing. They ended it perfectly.
I can relate to them a lot.
Well done.
Good write,
Phil xxx |
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Re: The Long Lonely Road
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 09:23:45 PM AEST
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Though I couldn’t get the rap right, I certainly read your heart write. GOOD...
Every long lonely road meet’s at a cross road with a guiding post that guide you to the right straight road.
FRANCO
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Re: The Long Lonely Road
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 02:02:04 AM AEST
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Sourires
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Re: The Long Lonely Road
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by jay89 on
Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 07:50:48 PM AEST
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i like it. i've traveled the long lonely road before.
i like it....keep it up
~jamie~
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