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Must be a mirage.
Contributed by
radstraightedge
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Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 07:43:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Is she merely a figment of their imagination? She always just seems like a hazzy formation. Those that see her, they must have good eyes, because everyone else seems to look right on by. Maybe they think she doens't care, or maybe she just isn't worthy of their admirable stares. She looks so dismal, as I glance in her direction. Cleary she's searching for some kind of perfection. But perfection is something that can only be claimed, when you have something to work for and something to gain. With no one to tell all these thoughts, she walks by herself and looks very distraught. I'm beginning to think she's just a dream because somehow I'm watching her tear at the seams. These seams, they hold in such important thoughts, that could very easily be the answers to the questions that are sought. As she slowly starts to tear at her soul, I can't believe what she's about to let go.
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Re: Must be a mirage.
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by trini on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 08:05:12 PM AEST
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ooo. a very nice write indeed.
I really enjoyed reading it.
keep up the good work
-Trini |
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Re: Must be a mirage.
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by twick on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 12:26:00 AM AEST
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| I liked the content but not the structure. I think it hinders the impact of this poem. But it still grabs the reader with suspense. |
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