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Contributed by
lillyjane
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Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 05:52:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Spring is here, everything new,
displays of spring flower's, glisten in dew,
Summer comes. rose's bloom,
first little bud's may and june,
Autumn comes, the new is old,
leaves on the tree's a beautiful gold,
our live's are like the season's,
every change is for a reason,
All a part of natures plan, ever since the world began...
Copyright ©
lillyjane
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2006-04-11 05:52:47]
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Re: Changes
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 07:36:30 AM AEST
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| Very much said in so few words. Great write....Mike |
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Re: Changes
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 07:44:00 AM AEST
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Lovely write...one thing tho' ...all those apostrophes ( ' ) need to disappear!
Jenni |
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Re: Changes
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by Manda2 on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 12:45:19 PM AEST
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Loved this poem Lillyjane, Nature shows us why time is so beautiful. If it wasn't for time passing nothing would ever be new. A really good inspiring poem Lilly.
xxkeep writing!xxxxxxx |
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