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i'll be the first to admit
Contributed by
Lucille
on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 12:04:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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The lights are low
Clothes skin tight
I'll be the first to admit
You've never looked better
Then when your body`s slammed against the wall
In a sweat
Pansy Boy
You make me panic when you disco
I'm calling you out
Grab your brother, get your girl, tell the news
Take a photo, a snapshot, do whatever you got to do
Just remember my face when I'm pinning you down
A secret
A lie
A kiss
A touch
A box with a gift
No happiness can compare
Everyone's dancing
An accident occurs
Shut and lock the doors
Go home to your room
Tell mommy you love her
Lay on your bed, newspaper aside
The headlines read
I hate you, I love you, but you don't know
There's my picture, I have disappeared
Throw the paper in the fire
It's the only thing you have left
I'll be the first to admit
I'm taking all the scars with me.
Copyright ©
Lucille
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2006-04-12 00:04:07]
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Re: i'll be the first to admit
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by born2loveyou123 on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 06:49:27 AM AEST
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| wow... I really like it, and can totally feel it!!! love the poem, hope to hear more from you! |
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