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My Bure (My Neighbour's) English Version
Contributed by
Caged Soul
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Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 04:10:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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The cats are ameauw, dogs are barking, its the middle of the night, everything building up to the fight. Chaotic moments, there aint no stop to the anger around me. Feet are stomping, tongues are rolling. neighbours wife are screaming, neighbour is roaring, a childs crying clenches the night sky.
Everything started when she asked neighbour whos perfume and lipstick his shirt is wearing. See, she knows shes not his only- stains on sheets and late night excesses prevents her from believing everything is in order, yet she keeps on hoping. Her biggest fear is that what she suspects could be true. She gets nauseous as she contemplates, how can he commit such a sordid deed- role model to daughter and son.
But she dont even dare consider leaving, hes still faithful provider and companion at night; most nights.
Day by day, she grows even smaller.
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Re: My Bure (My Neighbour's) English Version
(User Rating: 1 ) by FRANCO on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 03:06:38 AM AEST (User
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Good poem; can visualize a perfect neighborhood any where around the world. Your description has an universal appeal to it. GOOD.
FRANCO
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Re: My Bure (My Neighbour's) English Version
(User Rating: 1 ) by Somnium on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 06:17:03 PM AEST (User
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Really captured a reality to many
well done
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