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Guilty By Design.
Contributed by
tVirus
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Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 01:01:48 AM in AEST
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All thats good
all thats brigh,
everything happy
and all thats right
in all truths i find
a darker side
such bright light
can leave you blind.
in doing right
you get left behind
and what seems good ...
at the time
now seems wrong...
we ignored the signs.
I will never understand
what we chose and why
our actions reacted...
I am guilty by design...
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tVirus
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2006-04-13 01:01:48]
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Re: Guilty By Design.
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by Lips on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 01:48:48 AM AEST
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| Not bad.. I like it. |
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Re: Guilty By Design.
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by Shmokin on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 04:32:26 AM AEST
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| nice write :-) |
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Re: Guilty By Design.
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 05:12:36 AM AEST
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| a fine write |
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Re: Guilty By Design.
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by Michael_Bevins on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 07:54:43 AM AEST
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| Nice job, flowed very well. |
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Re: Guilty By Design.
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by Inevitable on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 08:13:38 AM AEST
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| I like this but maybe 'cause a piece of it reminded me of something that really has nothing to do with it. Great job anyways. |
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