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My World
Contributed by
Ben_Lace
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Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 03:12:32 PM in AEST
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Your voice is like the first signs of spring, always welcome and a comfort to my acing heart. I will never grow tired of hearing the words roll out of your mouth through your luscious lips which cause my heart to skip a beat every time I look upon them. The serenity which envelops me after hearing three small words, I love you, cause me to feel like a man who has just been awarded an honorable and monumental prize that will never tarnish. And when my response, I love you to, is spoken I feel as if I am being whisked away to a distant cloud or perhaps the moon. There is not a thing I wouldnt do for you in this world, for it is you whom I love and will always love for all of time. With out you in my world the trees would not be green, the roses would not be red and no flowers would ever bloom. Youre what makes my world wonderful and the skies blue and clouds white. I cant imagine my life without you and I hope I never will
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Re: My World
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by shelby on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 03:32:43 PM AEST
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a dreamy write, enjoyed this.
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Re: My World
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by Michael_Bevins on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 03:50:42 PM AEST
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| Put very nicely, I enjoyed it. |
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Re: My World
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 01:34:47 PM AEST
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WELCOME BEN............WELCOME ABOARD!
Thanking you for your fine comments, now it's my turn!
How romantic, how loving, how divine........
A Lucky girl the one you wrote from your heart and mind.
I hope she appreciates your beautiful rhyme-- I sure did!
Warm love
Lovingcritters
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