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bullet to my heart
Contributed by
aegurly
on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 05:23:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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As blue as the dark blue sea
my tears roll down my face
b/c noone can take your place
my 1st love and maybe my last
i know people aren't supposed to live in the past
i have tried to bring you back into my life
but you dont even notice me
sometimes i think i should just end it all
maybe with a bullet in my heart
when i was with you i felt so proud and tall
now thinking of you drives me up the wall
if i cant have you neither can she
we (me and her) willl see you in haties!!
mary/ aegurly's friend
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aegurly
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2006-04-13 17:23:11]
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Re: bullet to my heart
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by jada on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 11:26:22 PM AEST
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| gurl i can feel the anger in this poem. it was great!! read mines and tell me what you personally think. i give this a 4 |
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Re: bullet to my heart
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by Spike on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 01:27:18 AM AEST
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Just a friendly reminder - you should only post your own work. I have the same dilemma - some great poems from other people but the rules of the site are pretty clear on this, no matter how well intentioned you are.
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Re: bullet to my heart
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by marylou on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 07:45:40 PM AEST
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raven thanks for posting my poem but now i have my own account just wanted to let you know
marylou |
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Re: bullet to my heart
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by redtears on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 08:31:48 PM AEST
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| wow, very lovely, i really enjoyed it, she's a writer too! sweet! |
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Re: bullet to my heart
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by Panther on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 08:27:35 PM AEST
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I think this peom has a lot of emotion
I think it was an outstanding |
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