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And This is Only Mental
Contributed by
vickixcee
on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 07:41:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I've lost the need for friends
and other social things
just want to be released
from what feels like puppet strings
I'm sick of being sad all the time
and feeling like nothing is right
it makes me feel weak and vulnerable
as if help is out of sight
I know things get hard sometimes
but now i just cant take it
i'm sick of putting on a front
i'm sick of trying to fake it
I can't control anything right now
and for that i want to cry
everyone around me seems happy
except me, i sit and sigh
i begin to shed tears of dejection
and scream violently in my head
hurt all over, invisible, yet lethal
I'm alive buut feel so dead
Copyright ©
vickixcee
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2006-04-13 19:41:56]
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Re: And This is Only Mental
(User Rating: 1 )
by Clementine on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 06:47:59 PM AEST
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This is such a well written poem. I enjoyed it because I completely understand these feelings..and honestly, they are some pretty sucky feelings to have. Excellent job.
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