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This is the End
Contributed by
buckbee
on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 11:45:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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you know this is the end
and that you've lost the fight
when the pains so bad
that you cant sleep at night
the pain in your heart
from the mistake you made
the pain on your wrist
from the razor blade
you scream
you cry
and all you want
is to die
to be so far away
from all your pain...
it always comes back
over and over... again and again
as the tears stream down from your eyes
it blurrs your view
so that you cant see
the blood spilling out of you
your hands entangled in your hair
screaming with all your might
you've made up your mind
...tonight is the night
you pick up the blade
its already too late
no changing your mind
this is your fate
your pulse is racing
along with your mind
thats when you realize
the whole ******* world is blind
blind to the ********
blind to the lies
blind to your hatred and sadness
blind to your cries
maybe if they opened their eyes
they'd see a new point of view
... the lies they couldnt see
were the death of you
the lies from yourself
the lies from your "friends"
**** it, whatever
this is the end
you tired to tell yourself
that things would be ok
but the mistake that you made
is making you fade away
you'll never forgive yourself
your heart will never mend
so whats the point?
... this is the end
Copyright ©
buckbee
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2006-04-14 11:45:04]
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Re: This is the End
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by drtylilsecret on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 06:06:22 PM AEST
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wow, just today like 5 suicide poems have been posted, this one's my favorite though, i absolutely loved it. totally...realistic, could relate, and...ya. anyway great job.
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Re: This is the End
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by Aeris030388 on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 08:49:33 AM AEST
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| This poem reminded me of what i keep locked away behind my smile. The scars are still on my wrists. Well done, this was very powerful... |
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