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Faded Comparison
Contributed by
UrbanFlower
on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 12:51:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She wore red.
But it was faded, like the stain left on his sheets.
He wore black.
But it made him pale, like the smoke he blew from his French cigarette.
She put on a smile.
But it was wholesome, like the cotton candy child.
He frowned down on her.
But it had meaning, like shed never known.
She watched with bright blue eyes.
But she didnt see past yesterdays mascara.
He blinked through the haze.
But he saw with the clarity of a thousand eyes.
She fell.
But she neednt have feared.
He caught her.
But held her as tightly as he knew how.
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UrbanFlower
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2006-04-15 00:51:57]
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Re: Faded Comparison
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by TheStoryTeller on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 02:23:53 AM AEST
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| i quite liked this one, it's different to others i have read so far, but a good write all the same! |
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Re: Faded Comparison
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by JGB on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 03:04:32 AM AEST
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Don't know the story, but it sounds like a one night stand. Not necessarily a bad thing.
Good Write!!!
I like it
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