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I Wait for the Sun
Contributed by
Jane_Doe
on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 05:00:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Good morning, fair Sun,
I have antcipated this second in painfully stretched hours,
Since you abandoned me with the sorrowful moon,
Reflecting itself in my waiting eyes.
Although I tried,
Blue orbs were unwilling to be blinked away,
And the only orbs that fell from dissatisfied eyes,
Dripped in liquid crystal down a waiting face.
But now you've come to me,
And it is my hope that you will never again desert my soul,
Where my eyes close sleeplessly with ecstasy in you presence,
Embracing warmly a waiting heart.
Alas, fair Sun,
Your rays come coldly with reluctant despursal of fading color,
As a lunar shadow teases my smile into a frown,
And I only hope it doesn't offend you.
Copyright ©
Jane_Doe
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2006-04-15 05:00:30]
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Re: I Wait for the Sun
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by Archie on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 09:47:06 AM AEST
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| I like this poem a lot. It expresses the loneliness that is often felt when a family member leaves their parent alone when he or she has reached an elderly age. I hope things work out between the two of you. |
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