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Fates on the Highway
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
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Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 02:45:22 PM in AEST
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Does fate decide the highways I run?
The pavement is brick but looks as though it was blood
Refreshments? Never, but a tall tale told
The moon smiling at me as though none ever would
Its tyrannical in this quite belligerent fate
Passing in seconds but new forms to create
Derogatory terms used to beat my face
Conquer my mind but save my beautiful space
Why is fate no where near being prim?
Leaving everyones lives to the grim and violent end
I beg you to give me a final chance to smile
Please dont suffocate me in the swift river bend
You may preside over me but I have a good reason
For you to leave me as though another season
That I may fall but I will rise again
I will reach out to all and lend them a hand
Fate is the flower that blooms for you to smile
But dies in an instant; it never remains the same
Fates on the highway; we walk a million miles
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Re: Fates on the Highway
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 03:46:51 PM AEST
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| this is good alright, but i feel like there are many ideas here...might want to narrow it down, or cover whay fate me presidng over you, or what belligerent fate your dealing with. just my thoughts...but you have a way with words |
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Re: Fates on the Highway
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by aegurly on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 05:24:31 PM AEST
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I agree with the last comment
I was sort of confused with all the different ideas
But as Mary J said you have A way with words!!! |
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